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Friday 8 March 2013

Little Red Riding Hood



Little Red Riding Hood






Once upon a time there lived a girl named Little Red Riding Hood who lived with her mother in a little cottage. One day Little Red Riding Hood’s grandmother was very ill, so Little Red Riding Hood’s mother baked some custard tarts for grandmother. After that her Mum said to Little Red Riding Hood “Go and get your red cape, put it on. When you're done come in the kitchen, get the basket of tarts for grandma”. So she replied “Yes certainly Mum” so she went in the room, grabbed her cape then she went into the kitchen, then out she went.
Soon the Big Bad Wolf popped up out of a tree, but Little Red Riding Hood didn’t notice so she kept on walking. Straight after that  the big bad wolf quickly ran to  grandma’s cottage and the Big Bad Wolf was knocking on the door. Then Grandma said “ Who is it?”. Then the big bad wolf replied”It’s me Little Red Riding Hood”. So grandma said “Oh do come in”. So the big bad wolf came in and saw her in the bed. So the big bad wolf dragged Grandma out of bed and ate her from head to toe.


That was the end of Grandma. Suddenly Little Red Riding Hood came and was knocking on the door. The Big Bad Wolf said “Who is it”? “Its me Little Red Riding Hood”. After that the Big Bad Wolf said “ Come in my darling” so Little Red Riding Hood came in and placed the custard tarts next to the bed. Finally Little Red Riding Hood noticed. She said to the Big Bad Wolf “What hairy arms you’ve got” said Little Red Riding Hood “All the best to hug you with my darling” replied the Wolf. Suddenly she noticed something else“ What big teeth you’ve got” said Little Red Riding Hood.  “All the better to eat you up my darling” said the Wolf. Then GULP the wolf ate Little Red Riding Hood.  The wood cutter heard her scream and he got his gun. He went into Grandma’s cottage and shot the big bad wolf. The wood cutter cut the his stomach open and out popped Grandma and Little Red Riding Hood.  After that Grandma said “What are these tarts doing here?”. Little Red Riding Hood replied “Oh Mum said you were very ill and she thought you might like  some custard tarts” then grandma said “Oh thats nice of her”. Finally they ate the custard tarts  and they all lived happily ever after.









THE END





1 comment:

Caitlin said...

Hi Samantha

I really like your Narrative on Little Red Red Riding Hood. I
think that it is very detailed and the capital letters are in
the right places keep up the good work

From
Caitlin

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